July 22, 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about a hometown. It can be your hometown or a fictional one. Who is there? When is it set? What is happening? Go where the prompt leads!
Lost Dad
Hometown is where I met my Lost Dad.
I was happy to introduce him to mom, but, she didn’t believe me.
I showed him. She didn’t speak to him, she took me away from hometown, then I became more social with new friends, I had so much fun. MoM was worried.
She brought me back to my hometown, I was locked, tortured by mom. Then I was arrested for killing her, but, I didn’t, nobody believed.
I met my dad again, he believed me, he also advised, “Living won’t talk to the dead and you should stop doing it”
The End !
So then…your dad was dead and your mother had killed him, then you killed her, you’re in prison and you talk to your dad?
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That’s right π I knew you will figure this out π π
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Thanks. π I just wanted to be sure I had it right.
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I found my Lost Dad …
… and it turned out he had been looking for his Lost Son all the same time.
— Catxman
http://www.catxman.wordpress.com
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Of course Simonβs signature π
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Thank you Ribana, It’s been a while, isn’t it ππ
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Back in action? π
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I wish, βΊοΈ Planning to be the Planned Man again π Hope it works again.π
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Hahahaβ¦difficult but not impossible π πͺπ»
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That’s right, difficult π not impossible Though π let’s see about that.
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You wrote a chilling mystery with all the elements of a longer story. Well done!
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Thank you Charli for the lovely writing boost up πβ€οΈ Have a Lovely day π₯³
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Great flash Simon! What a twist of a story, clever writing. I do hope your character gets some justice after such a rough life so far.
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I wish π maybe on my next big tale ππ
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Thank you so much Rebecca ππ€β€οΈ
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