November 14, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that includes a lie. What is the lie? It can be subtle or blatant. Who tells the lie and why? Is it an unreliable narrator? Go where the prompt leads!
- Submit by November 19, 2022. Please use the form if you want to be published in the weekly collection. The Collection publishes on the Wednesday following the next Challenge. Rules & Guidelines. Stories must be 99-words.
- Carrot Ranch only accepts stories through the form below. Accepted stories will be published in a weekly collection. Writers retain all copyrights.
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- Please include your byline which is the name or persona you attribute to your writing.
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Poison
He always said
when I lied
He knew, he said.
This time, I said
He never knew When I lied
When I constantly lied
Because the doctor said
He cannot be cured
I lied to his face
Hiding the truth behind
I lied to his face
Smiling with tears behind
I lied to his face
When I killed me
I lied to his face
When I killed him
It was the kindest poison
I made with love and passion
A lie, I named it as a Lie
Kills slowly but definitely we die
Before he died
I died happily
The end.
with 99 words, you made an emotional story yet full of suspense as well 👌😊 it’s not easy to deliver a message with a limited number of words but you made it look so easy as usually dear Simon 😊
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A typical Simon story I would say 😆
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Dark and mysterious, passionate. I like your foray into poetry here Simon. The repetition helps build the tension and suspense of the story.
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Thank you dear Huguette 🥰 Means a LOT 🤗Hugs..
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🤗😉You knew it already 😁😸 yep, typical one.. a poem this time 😁😁
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Thanks for the compliment 🥰 Means a lot, motivation 😍 🥰
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😊💕
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