October 30, 2020, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about life savers on any body of water. It can be a formal Coast Guard, historical or contemporary. It could be an individual who unexpectedly takes on the role. Go where the prompt leads!
Slippery rocks
As he laid down on the beach, he stared at the beauty of cloudy day. Stared at the sun that hides behind the clouds he witnessed the beauty of birds flying in group towards the north, he started walking, little did he noticed he was about to fall in a hole beside a rock, and the next moment he was drowning, he tried his best to keep the head out but the waves pushed him down, someone pulled him out and in seconds he was up beside the rock, an old man shivering said slippery rocks son, be careful!
The end!
Sorry, but I got confuse after reaching this part “he witnessed a push”?
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Oh is that a pull π€ oh god π π how did I not notice did I confused it anywhere too? π I’ll correct it now.
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Nope now is very clear. Loving it β€
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I love the lyricism of the second sentence, Simon. Well done!
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Thanks for stopping by π
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Always be careful with the slippery rocks or slippery people π
Well done Simon! π€©
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Thank you π π and seeing you in a weekend Sunday π Oops the sunday is over π Have a lovely week ahead β¨π
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Well done Simon, these short stories are good, keep it up!ππΊπ
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Thank you so much Steve, these are my latest stress killers πβΊοΈ Happy you liked them all π€π€π€
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