An usual fiction – End of the line

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Ranson asked us to sit at one corner and started his mind investigation process

Now your age is 10, what is your name? – I am Celene

How you do you do ? – I am happy and excited

Excited about what? – My mom promised me that she will take me to Disney land.

Sounds great! What happened then? – she broke her promise.

I’m sorry about that. Did she said why? – Celene started crying like a kid, Ranson asked further and again and again and again … and then… There was a deep silence.

Another girl voice this time it is rusty but still Celene’s voice modulation and it came like “I am going to kill her” Ranson questioned why? “Because, I want to live my life. Celene is torturing me” the statement made a goose bumps to both of us.

What? who are you? How did Celene torture you? what she did? – Celene is useless, social anxiety, obedient, not capable of raising her voice for her needs, she suppress all her emotions for her parents to love her. They always need Celene, no matter what. Then, you know what? i popped up. i want to let out and live the life i wanted as i want it. but, She is too much active, this coward is not deserved to live in this world, and the only way I can live my life the way I wanted is to kill her”

With Ransons further questions we came to know more about Elene.

Elene

I am Elene, i don’t have a child hood, but I hate most things i have.

I hated everybody in this house. All my years of frustration and suppressed emotions burst out when her mom failed me to take me to Disney land.

Celene is useless, social anxiety, obedient, not capable of raising her voice for her needs, she suppress all her emotions for her parents to love her. They always need Celene, no matter what. Then, you know what? i popped up. i want to let out and live the life i wanted as i want it. but, She is too much active, this coward is not deserved to live in this world, and the only way I can live my life the way I wanted is to kill her. I had to do it to live as myself.

I made her mom suffer her entire life.

I made her trip on the stair case. She fell down so fast hoping she would die. But she didn’t. She survived in a wheel chair. I tried to let her out of the house by talking to her dad.

Everytime he called me Celene, i lost myself to sleep.

I don’t want to live a magical life, I want real life.

I made her fail the subjects I made her to hate her dad for not letting good things happen to her.

I make my own friends, own social media accounts and friends out at the streets, fighting and smoking weed. They made my life better during nights. not a good idea, but that was a relief.

She fell in love, she don’t deserve that. I made him cheat her. I disguised myself and slept with other guys and took photo and sent to him. He broke up, as i planned… not only that I let him met with an accident and die. That made her fall into more depression.

I was expecting Celene will try to die in that whole depression process and so that I could live my life the way I wanted to be.

My plan never worked at all. There again she fell in love. She is a weak useless girl; she doesn’t deserve to live in this world. She never knew me. She never tried. She never listened to her mind voice. The way I screamed, I wish she knew it.

Again I tried my best to buy his ex-girlfriend and let her kiss him in public in front of her. And I was there to take her there and see the kissing scene, she broke. And she fell again into depression, But she never lost herself.

At that time her dad called me and spoke to me about the office, i transferred all my rage in to him. I slapped back this ass hole thinking he will lodge a complaint on her so that she will hate her life in prison for some days.

Damn! This useless guy is fallen in love with her. How could he? All the hate have risen to the peak when he proposed to her, I should’ve hit him in the car yesterday, I only got a bike to hit him, he has gone unconscious. I thought he is dead. Damn! He came back again.

Her useless father and her useless boyfriend, I have another plan to wipe out her boyfriend from existence. I’m sure this time she will be the most depressed person to let herself down. So that I can live my life I wanted to be.

When Elene been giving statements to Ranson he injected another dose to take her more deep into the trance, and she was in deep sleep.

Ranson – “Celene needs to be under observation for some period. It looks, She is having multi personality disorder. I can only confirm after further observation. Whatever she is going through now, she will end her life sooner or later by Elene, plus we will never know when Elene has come out.”

We both agreed and sent Celene with Ranson

1 year later… Ranson called me and her dad to the hospital

Ranson “Hi Sam, This is a complicated multi personality disorder, her own alter ego wants to kill herself and she was on a suicide mission. As I mentioned before sooner or later Elene will come out. She has come during therapy, Elene has come multiple times to escape but after repeated therapy I made Elene understand, I convinced her Celene will do what she wanted. she is controlled somehow. For past 6 months we have never seen Elene out. I’m releasing Celene now. If you see any symptom of Elene you must bring her immediately. Don’t push Celene to any stressful situations that may leave a way for Elene. Any day if Celene experience a deep sleep during day time, bring her to me.”

After few months we both continued our life. Celene is now aware of Elene and her intentions. We also made Celene to try to read Elene’s thoughts was also advised if she felt she is been sleeping again without any memories advices to call Mr. Ranson. Sam and Celene are now together and got married this year.

Elene is a complicated alter ego, Luckily she didn’t show up for two years.

But one day, Instead of Celene, Elene wakes up “Damn, 2 years is a very long break, Time to have some fun”

🥺😲😲

The end

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12 thoughts on “An usual fiction – End of the line

  1. Damn, you finish it like this? Is like the end of Avengers movies and then I have to wait years to see the next one, but this is over…😲
    I guess is not easy to write but you have great ideas Simon! The very complicated life of Celene and Elene 🙂

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  2. Hi Ribana, First, a huge thanks for readin from start till endng😉 Motivation from people like you is my source of energy to write✨✍️ Your words are a biggest source and Jessica as well. So kind of you. Ending is became something from nothing, hope it looks good and over😁 Have a beautiful week Ribana✨🤗

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